The Night I Had a Fight With the Almost-Tooth Fairy

by Amber-Dawn Rische-Nicholas
(Nashville, TN, USA)





The Night I Had a Fight with the Almost Tooth Fairy was the Third Place Winner in our 2010 Short Story Writing Contest. Read a little about the author then scroll down to listen to the story.

Amber-Dawn is a 29 year old professional musician that loves children's literature. Her favorite books are The Chronicles of Narnia, The Velveteen Rabbit, and the collection of Beatrix Potter stories. She's been able to see the world, via her band, touring all over North America and Europe. She's also a volunteer playing music at nursing homes and Vanderbilt Children's Hospital with Musicians On Call, an organization that brings music to the sick. She's in college now, seeking a degree in early childhood education and/or library science. She likes fashion, funky hair cuts and colors, exercising, playing with her Great Dane, Penelope, and hanging out/watching movies with her husband.



The Night I Had a Fight with the Almost Tooth Fairy


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I'm Tommy, but most people call me Tommy Tall Tales, because I've been known to tell some mighty tall tales, but not this time-no sirree bob. This here story I'm about to tell ya is the honest truth, cross my heart and I'll eat a slimy slug to prove it.

It all started one night when I got into a potato fight with my brother, Tug. We were arguin' 'bout who's turn it was to help Mama with the dishes, and Tug picked up a potato and threw it at me. Well of course I threw it right back at him, but I didn't see the next one comin' as it flew out of Tug's hands. That potato hit me smack dab in the mouth and knocked one of my front teeth clean out. Blood was pourin' out, and (I hate to tell this part) I started cryin' like a baby. I wasn't scared of the blood, but my mouth hurt worse than the time I bit down on a cactus, and I was madder n' a mama goose when you go chasin' after her babies. Mama gave me some ice to suck on, and after it didn't hurt so bad, I took a good look at my tooth and boy was it a dandy. I started thinkin' 'bout all the things I could do with it.

Maybe I could enter it at the fair and win a ribbon. Or I could show it off at school like Jim Bob did when he lost his tooth. Or maybe I would tie it to a piece of string and make a necklace for my baby sis, Minnie Mae-but she'd only be able to borrow it because I was gonna keep that tooth forever.

Mama said I was supposed to put it under my pillow and when the tooth fairy came, she'd bring me some money and trade it for my tooth. Now I sure could have used some money, but there was just no way I was gonna let that ole tooth fairy take that mighty fine tooth of mine. So I locked my window to keep her out, but then I got to thinkin' that she, bein' a fairy and all, might be able to get in anyway, and if she did, surer n' a bear goes searchin' for honey, she'd go searchin' for my tooth. So I had to think of a real good hidin' place. Under my bed? Naw, too easy. In the closet? No. Then I had it! One of the floorboards under the rug had come loose, and it was just the right place to hide a tooth. So I wrapped my tooth in tissue paper, and stuffed it in the crack under the floorboard.

It was a good thing I slept with one eye open, 'cause sometime past midnight, I saw a little light 'bout the size of a butterfly right outside my window. I knew it was that ole tooth fairy comin' to get my tooth. Then quicker 'n I could say, 'Crawdads in the crick,' she appeared inside my room! I suppose lockin' that window was no good. I pretended to be asleep, but I had to make double sure my tooth was safe, so I kept my eyes open just a peek. That ole tooth fairy was floatin'' towards me. Closer and closer she came 'till she landed on my bed. Then she lifted the corner of my pillow and vanished!

I held my breath. I could feel her movin' around, lookin' for my tooth. What's gonna happen when she doesn't find it? I wondered. Then suddenly, like a gust of wind, she came flyin' out the other side of my pillow, and zoomed under my bed. It sounded like a train wreck as she banged into tin cans, rocks, and other treasures I kept hidden under there. She searched and searched. I wondered when she was gonna give up, but then quick as a flash she came out and headed straight for my dresser, grabbed the latches and yanked all the drawers open! Now that's mighty strong for someone her size if you ask me. She tossed all my clothes out on the floor, but still no tooth. Then she whizzed over to my toy chest and dove in. My blood was boilin' as I watched her slingin' and flingin' toys everywhere. I wasn't pretendin' to be asleep anymore-no sirree bob. Grittin' my teeth and shoutin', I jumped out of bed, turned on the light, and ran for my minnow catchin' net.

That ole tooth fairy wasn't expectin' that, and she took off like a scared rabbit. She zipped this way and that way as I chased her 'round the room. Books tumbled off the shelf, pictures went flyin' off the wall, and my paints and easel came crashin' to the ground. I was plum tuckered out, and could hardly catch my breath when that ole tooth fairy flew low to the ground. I knew it was my only chance of catchin' her, so I dove headfirst after her, but I slipped on the rug and stubbed my toe on the loose floorboard. My net went flyin', and I landed face down on the ground. That ole tooth fairy burst out laughin', but it was no funny matter, 'cause the tissue wrapped around my tooth was stickin' out of the floorboard like a sore thumb. That ole tooth fairy's eyes lit up, and she went after it like a dog on a bone.

"Oh no you don't!" I hollered.

Quick as lightnin' I jumped to my feet and dashed for my net. She had my tooth unwrapped and was just carryin' it away, when, WHOOSH! I scooped her right up.

"I got you, you ole tooth crazed fairy!" I yelled.

But when I looked at that ole tooth fairy, she wasn't fightin' or yellin'-she was curled up in a little ball and cryin' her heart out. I wasn't expectin' that, and I couldn't help but feel sorry for her.

"Please don't cry, tiny Tooth Fairy," I begged her. "I'll let you go if you promise to leave my tooth alone."

"It's-it's-not-that," she sobbed. "It's just that I have always wanted to become a real tooth fairy, and now I'll never be."

"Don't be silly, of course you're a real tooth fairy," I said.

"Not yet," she sniffed. "I'm still in the try-outs. You see, fairies have to collect a certain amount of teeth to become real tooth fairies. This is my last night in the try-outs, and yours is the last tooth I need, but I see now I won't make it."

She looked so sad.

"What do ya do with all the teeth you collect?" I asked her.

"We build cities with them," she said. "Magical fairy cities that sparkle like stars."

I imagined my tooth shinin' like a star in a magic city. That seemed much better than winnin' a ribbon or showin' it off at school.

"I'll tell you what, Almost Tooth Fairy," I said. "If you promise to put my tooth in just the right place in your city, and if you help me get my room back to spotless, I'll let you have it."

I let her out of the net and quicker 'n I could eat up a batch of cookies, she had my room back to spotless, and true to my word, I handed over my tooth.

The almost tooth fairy handed me a gold coin.

"When a child first loses a tooth, it has a special shine that only the fairies can see, but it only shines the first night it comes out," she said. "If you put this coin under your pillow every time you lose a tooth, the fairies will not be able to see the shine and will not know you have lost a tooth. Then you will always be able to keep your teeth."

"Yippee!" I said. "I'll have the greatest collection of teeth in the world, and Tug's gonna be madder n' a hornet 'bout that'."

I went to thank her, but before I could say, 'Crabapples up a tree,' she was gone.

Well, that's the story 'bout how I got in a fight with the almost tooth fairy, who of course is a real tooth fairy now. Most people think I'm tellin' another tall tale, and Tug says I made up a whopper to beat his story 'bout how he knocked my tooth out with a potato. They tell me to prove it, and ask to see my gold coin. But that's the thing about a gold coin from a fairy, you can't go showin' it off, or it might turn into a regular old coin.

You might think I'm tellin' another tall tale, but if I were you, next time you loose a tooth and if you want to keep it, be sure and sleep with one eye open and keep a good, sturdy minnow catchin' net nearby. And if you're still not sure, like I said, I'll eat a slimy slug to prove it.


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Jul 17, 2016
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Awesome
by: Anonymous

Awesome !!!

Jul 12, 2016
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WOW
by: Kaly19gamer

Amazed how the story went..i was'nt expecting it??!!😁!?!

Jul 04, 2016
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cool
by: Anonymous

really cool story i like it nice

Jul 03, 2016
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good
by: wayne

its wonderful love it love it love it

Jul 02, 2016
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good
by: wayne

its wonderful love it love it love it

Jun 28, 2016
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by: Elsa

I really really loved this story
It was awesome! I especially loved the part when he said, I hate to tell this part, I started crying like a baby... Hehehehehe
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Anyways, love the story , IT WAS AWESOME!!!
So keep up the good work and make more funny short, or maybe sometimes as long as this one, but! Always make and think, that we'll love them...


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Jun 18, 2016
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Great story
by: Aisha

This is a really good story
My kids seemed to enjoy it while I was reading it to them before sleep

Jun 05, 2016
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Cool
by: Anonymous

I want more stories like this

Jun 03, 2016
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Great read!
by: Anonymous

This was good I looooooved it and I recommend it to those who believe in the tooth fairy.

May 30, 2016
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ΔŒΓ³ΓΆΕ‚!
by: Anonymous

Í Ε‚ΓΈvΔ™ thΔ«Ε› Ε‘tΓ΄rΓΏ ā Ε‚ΓΆt.
But I know, there is no such real tooth fairy.
If this is real, I will be extremely excited.
Every time, it is my mum who puts the coin under the pillow.

May 22, 2016
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fantastico
by: Brianna Nosworthy

I love this story.I never seen someone who love their tooth that has fallen out like this person. I enjoyed this story it was really funny.I hope this author continue to write more amazing story. OMG LOL DWL

May 21, 2016
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Awesome!
by: Anonymous

Spencer Marley and Jorja enjoyed this story in Nana's house,

May 20, 2016
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Awsom story
by: Spencer and Marley

Spencer and Marley had this story in Nanas house and loved every bit of it, thank you

May 17, 2016
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Cool
by: Anonymous

It was a nice story πŸ™‚πŸ™‚πŸ™‚πŸ‘


May 16, 2016
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funny story
by: dante

it was soooooo funny that I cried

May 11, 2016
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Fun Story
by: Nanerby

My grand girl enjoyed this story. She got so tickled at the thought of a determined tooth fairy. Thank you for such a delightful storyπŸ‘

May 10, 2016
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I love this story help me child get to sleep make more pls
by: AMAZING

Yes I love it.it let my child fall asleep he was smiling.please make more this story should be top pageβ˜β˜πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘β€β€β€β€β€β€πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘

May 10, 2016
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Greaty Great Great
by: Ragul

It was so funny.One day I will copy Tom.I hope everyone liked the story!!!!!!!!πŸ˜‰πŸ˜ƒπŸ˜β˜ΊπŸ˜ŠπŸ˜€

May 10, 2016
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Great Story
by: Adrianna

Thank you very much !!
I really loved your story, it is pout of the ordinary.
Adrianna

May 05, 2016
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The night I had a fight with the almost tooth fairy
by: Anonymous

Loved this story, going to tell it to my grandchildren

May 03, 2016
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Great Story
by: Anonymous

I loved this story. Can you please write another one.

May 02, 2016
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so coooooooooollllll
by: ragul

I liked the story. My favourite part is when the boy tries to catch the tooth fairy

Apr 28, 2016
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Tooth fairy
by: Anonymous

Love the story be sure to write some more!!!!πŸ˜€πŸ˜€πŸ˜€πŸ˜€πŸ˜€

Apr 28, 2016
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smile
by: Anonymous

it was a smile

Apr 26, 2016
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Cool
by: Anonymous

Nicely written, great job on this narrative!

Apr 22, 2016
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Nice story
by: Talei

I like the story its very nice and funny to

Apr 20, 2016
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Loved this story
by: Anonymous

I read this to my daughter on the phone because I am away from home :( We both loved the story although I struggled a bit with the "accent"... !

Apr 11, 2016
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Breathtaking Story
by: Just Me ;)

This story was very nice. I thin every kid should read it!!!!! Great job, Amber!!!!!

Apr 09, 2016
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tall tail
by: Anonymous

another tall tail

Apr 04, 2016
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This is so amazing
by: Tayiba

I love this story because I liked it when people call Tommy Tall Tale, it is really funny.




Mar 30, 2016
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Best Story Ever
by: Anonymous

Who would ever think of somebody fighting with an almost tooth fairy? THAT IS AMAZING!!!

Mar 26, 2016
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very cool!
by: Anonymous

this is a very cool story! I really liked it when they made the alliteration timmy tall tales with t,t,t!

Mar 14, 2016
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Thx
by: Anonymous

Nicely done.
I enjoyed the story.
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Feb 17, 2016
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great
by: Anonymous

this was a real good story i think every kid should read it

Feb 15, 2016
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It was good.
by: Chloe

I really liked the story. My Favourite part was when the boy was catching the tooth fairy.

Jan 24, 2016
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How do you come up with this stuff?
by: Evan

I really liked the story, how did you come up with it?

Jan 12, 2016
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Grrrrrreeeaaaattttt story
by: Anonymous

My son and I read the story right before he went to bed. We found it to be very very funny and want to congratulate the author for writing such a great story. The language and it was very humorous and we can almost imagine that little fairy getting stuck in the net and conceding defeat.

Dec 21, 2015
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awesomness
by: rc

i really liked this soooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooo much. #fairytalelover2.0

Nov 25, 2015
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The night I had fight with almost tooth fairy
by: Sparklies

Great story I'd like to read it a hundred times

Nov 13, 2015
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great
by: Hong Jin Ning

I enjoy the fairy tale

Oct 24, 2015
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Good read
by: Lenny

Good story, I need to get a net for when i lose another tooth!!!!

Sep 13, 2015
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Great
by: Teddy

So funny and cool, the reader's quite good at it, but I sure ain't gonna say it's bad. HA HA HA LOL!

Sep 03, 2015
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hallarious
by: jack

this story is so funny milk came out my nose

Aug 05, 2015
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Whimsical!
by: Anonymous

Very Creative.
Love the story! Very colorful action words.
My students will enjoy reading this aloud.
Thank you for sharing!

Jul 20, 2015
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pretty good
by: cody collingwood

it was a good story but i have red better with story's involving tooth fairys

Jul 18, 2015
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good one
by: monisha

beautiful original story ! amazed by the author's creativity.

Jul 12, 2015
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Great
by: Anonymous

Nice Story it's just that I found it hard to understand it's american accent. Awesome though. AND VERY FUNNY! LOL :)

May 27, 2015
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Fantasy and fun
by: anonymousJ

Great story. THOUGHt it was very fun and anyone would enjoy it I am sURE!:) ;) Γ·)

May 22, 2015
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The Story
by: Anonymous

It's amazing, especially the fact that the words like thinkin or mamma are because it makes it show this persons accent and it makes the story more realistic in MY opinion. But over all, I think it would be good for 9 year olds.:)

Mar 31, 2015
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The best
by: Divyirsh umasuten

Great way to write the story good luck with the next one

Mar 02, 2015
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Let's here it for the Tooth Fairy
by: Anonymous

I really enjoyed the story, thought it was funny and very imaginative, thanks for sharing.

Feb 14, 2015
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The tooth fairy
by: Mohamed

This story is fricked awesome

Feb 04, 2015
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GREAT STORY
by: megan potts

I love this story but it rhymes to much I wish I had a flight with the tooth fairy too lol

Jan 22, 2015
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BY:LAUREN SMITH
by: Anonymous

RE WORD IT BECAUSE THERE ARE WORDS LIKE THINKIN INSTEAD OF THINKING SO CORRECT IT AND ITS MUM NOT MAMMA UNLESS YOU REALLY WANT IT TO BE LOL BUT NICE STORY OVER ALL

HOW DO ALWAYS WRITE STORY'S THEY ARE GOOD I READ THEM, EVERY DAY SO QUITE IMPRESSED SO THANK YOU FOR YOUR TIME PS;i am am now 12 so got to move on to more grown up books lol

** Editor's note - You are correct that there are some words in the story that aren't grammatically correct, however; that is how the author intended it to read. Some parts of the world or country use words and sayings that other parts of the world do not. I believe the author intended for this story to take place in the southern United States, where there are different words, accents and sayings. I'm glad you enjoyed the story and we appreciate your comments! :)

Jan 12, 2015
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great
by: kiara

wow great story.

Jan 10, 2015
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Response
by: Amber-Dawn

Cool, Rod! I hope they liked it. Thanks!

Nov 27, 2014
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Tall Tales Stretch Your Imagination
by: Anonymous

Very good, funny and a nice lift.

Nov 26, 2014
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great
by: Raj Agarkar

I think that the story needed some less rhymes


Nov 20, 2014
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Fantastic story
by: AnonymousRachel

WishI'd known about the nearly tooth fairy when I lost my first tooth!! I swallowed my first one !!

Nov 14, 2014
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Tooth Fairy fight
by: Anonymous

I ENJOYED THIS STORY because it's funny and I think it would be a great read aloud to great many grades

Nov 14, 2014
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Tooth Fairy fight
by: Anonymous

I ENJOYED THIS STORY because it's funny and I think it would be a great read aloud to a great many grades.

Oct 21, 2014
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It was good
by: Ella

Wow the words in it made me feel like I was going in

Oct 18, 2014
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Great book bout tooth fairy
by: Jamir Woodard

This was a great book about a tooth fairy I want to read this book again. I always leave my tooth under my pillow for the tooth fairy to come and get it and leave me lots of money every time I lose a tooth.

Oct 14, 2014
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nice job author
by: summia

I am looking forward to reading this story to my little sister and I give you have all the credit for this story.

Sep 14, 2014
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My Opinion
by: Sammy

A funny laugh out loud story that is recommended highly for children.

Sep 02, 2014
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5th Grade Teacher
by: Anonymous

I am so thankful to come across this site. I am teaching a lesson on imaginative writing to some awesome fifth graders who will definitely enjoy this story as much as I did. Very cute story!

Sep 01, 2014
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summer reading challenge JPS
by: anonymous

I read this book for a summer reading challenge and this story almost finished my list one more book to go. Just so you know my real name is flabberdabberdingdong so I will tell you if I won the challenge or not

You have turned my frown up side down
I am nine years old

See ya all soon

Jul 23, 2014
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Great!
by: Anonymous

Such a good story! It'll keep my grand-kids' attention, that's for sure! :)

Jun 05, 2014
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Response
by: Amber-Dawn

Thank you, everyone for all of the nice comments you have left. I haven't checked this page in a long time,and it's inspiring to see what you've written. :)
Amber-Dawn

May 27, 2014
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This Was A Terrific Story
by: Patrick

This was a wonderful story. I liked it a lot.

Feb 10, 2014
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Hope to lose another tooth
by: Secret

I would do the same if I had to lose another tooth. Good story

Nov 07, 2013
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A great read out loud story!
by: Rod

I am the "Mystery Guest" for my twin grandsons' second grade class. I am excited about reading the story to them tomorrow.

Oct 15, 2013
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Want some more money
by: Anonymous

I am always going to put my tooth under the pillow for some money Wouldn't you??

Oct 15, 2013
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Want some more money
by: Crazy Person

I am always putting my tooth under my pillow because i want money and i want to have a lot of money to

Oct 12, 2013
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A high rated book...
by: Anonymous123

Sooooooo cute and well very funny when he was after the fairy!

Oct 12, 2013
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A high rated book...
by: Anonymous

Sooooooo cute and well very funny when he was after the fairy!

Jul 11, 2013
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Tremendous
by: Esther

The best story I ever read

Apr 15, 2013
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mhgffsdaz
by: yuthikkaa

wah!it is a nice story!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Apr 05, 2013
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best story
by: pernelle

i love this story when i first read it i taught it was boring but is awsome.

Feb 15, 2013
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Brilliant
by: Anonymous

That was brilliant!!!!! I am going to have to read that to my class on Monday! Thank you!

Dec 19, 2012
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Happy
by: Rah

I think of it as a happy story

Nov 13, 2012
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the night i had a fight with the almost tooth fairy
by: damani

i love this book, it was funny when he said he beat up the tooth fairy

Oct 21, 2012
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Very cute
by: Anonymous

I loved it. Very cute. I will read it to my students tomorrow!

Sep 24, 2012
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Brilliant
by: Emma

For a short story that was fantastic. I know the tooth fairy is not real but i do want to try that out next time i lose a tooth. Im definitly keeping this story in mind. So funny and interesting!

Apr 13, 2012
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Terrific
by: Rob

What a terrific story! I really enjoyed this and hope to read more of your work.

Mar 23, 2012
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Delightful
by: Anonymous

Just read your story and found it delightful. Some imagination you have little lady. I can just imagine what you will write when you get my age and have a lifetime of memories to inspire you. Keep up the good work. Roy

Mar 22, 2012
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pretty good
by: sc fan

cute story





























































Mar 02, 2012
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How awesome is it?
by: Anonymous

It was absolutely AWESOME loved it.
I wanna read it again.

Feb 26, 2012
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hi
by: Anonymous

i love it

Feb 23, 2012
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comment about the toothfairy story
by: Anonymous

that was great i bet you he woulda ate that slug even if he didnt want to

Feb 03, 2012
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Sorry for the misspelled word.
by: Anonymous

I can't believe I spelled "There" with "their." I totally used the wrong spelling for the meaning. Oops. Sorry.

Jan 31, 2012
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Reply
by: Amber-Dawn

Ha ha. I bet their are a lot of kids who do want to keep their teeth after they've fallen out.

Jan 29, 2012
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Awesome!
by: Anonymous

Wow!!!!!!!!!!!!!!l can't believe it, this is a story that I have never and ever heard before. If this would happen to me once l would be so surprised, but not really I guessed. Sometimes others don't won't fairy to take their tooth away, because others feel like it is a special gift for them. So yeah cool story though.

Jan 26, 2012
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my big (Little) sis...
by: Anonymous

so i guess i must be the inspiration for minnie mae.. i loved the story and the names and i can't wait to read more of them. how about a posting of the life of a leaf??? now that's a goodin too. i love you very much and so glad your story did well. i'm about to go sing. singing about your story!!! mckenna wrote a good one about a rat... i think it was about me hehehe. love you so much! lillie mae

Jan 24, 2012
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Thank you!
by: Anonymous

Thank you, everyone! It feels great to have people read my story! Amber-Dawn

Jan 22, 2012
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Ain't no tall tale :D
by: WhiteWings

I read this to my little sister as a bed night story she loved it! And so did I! I think I liked it more? Lol amazing little story with alot of humor.

Jan 18, 2012
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FANTASTIC
by: THE GUY WHO LEAVE NOTES IN CAPITALS LETTERS

I THINK THIS POEM IS STRAIGHT UP FANTASTIC

Jan 10, 2012
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i loved this story
by: krystal

even though this song was long i still loved it. when i saw the title i knew it was going to be a good story

Dec 06, 2011
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Almost tooth fairy
by: Alexis

Your story was very, very good....

Nov 29, 2011
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good
by: Anonymous

i think the story is pretty good

Nov 17, 2011
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give me my tooth
by: wilson

wow whoever wrote this story you did a great job :)

Oct 22, 2011
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Fun story
by: Anonymous

Beautifully done, Amber Dawn! You created and maintained your charactor's personality and space so well....and it's fun, too! I wish that I had a kid to read it to!! Congrats!

Oct 20, 2011
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nia
by: nia

i like this story i love it !$$$$$$

Oct 19, 2011
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awsome
by: akon

that was the best story ever!

Oct 18, 2011
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dominique
by: nickie

COOL

Oct 18, 2011
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the night i had a fight with a almost tooth fairy
by: Anonymous

i love it

Oct 17, 2011
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nice
by: jaden

i enjoyed this story areal lot

Sep 20, 2011
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BEAST!!!!!
by: Anonymous

this was the beastest story ever i love you

Aug 09, 2011
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A nice story
by: vidushee mishra

I had lots of fun reading it.

Aug 05, 2011
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Fantastic story
by: Arti

hi,
I think this a an amazing story.. Very well written and holds you till the end..
Arti

Jun 10, 2011
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Fairies
by: Zeena\Hana

We liked it

Jun 07, 2011
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The night I had a fight with the almost-tooth fairy
by: Lizze

I think it was a great story ,in fact It was fantastic.I hope you write more stories like that.it really inspired me too.

May 15, 2011
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Awesome story
by: Anonymous

I laughed so hard I was cryin.

Apr 29, 2011
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coooool
by: caroline

cool story i really liked it but unfortunetely i didn t like the names

Apr 27, 2011
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good
by: spongebob

more than good if you ask me this story is glory.

Apr 26, 2011
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cooool
by: Anonymous

cool story

Apr 12, 2011
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soo cool
by: princess

i like it such a good story i really enjoyedd it

Apr 04, 2011
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by: Anonymous

brilliant story. i realy realy loved it.

Feb 13, 2011
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Wonderful.
by: Hiefa

I am delighted. Wonderful story.

Oct 31, 2010
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The talented Amber Dawn
by: Kevin

Amber,
What a wonderful story! You really have surprised me, you have so much talent. I have a feeling, many more stories to come. Keep up the good work. Maybe you can write a song about it?

Oct 31, 2010
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Fun story
by: Anonymous

Beautifuly done, Amber Dawn! You created and maintained your charactor's personality and space so well....and it's fun, too! I wish that I had a kid to read it to!! Congrats!

Oct 31, 2010
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Fun story
by: Anonymous

Beautifuly done, Amber Dawn! You created and maintained your charactor's personality and space so well....and it's fun, too! I wish that I had a kid to read it to!! Congrats!

Oct 30, 2010
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Southern Cadence
by: Auntie Nana

Loved the southern cadence of Tommy's words, all those old fashioned sayings were wonderful! Great imagination! Hope it publishes!!!

Oct 30, 2010
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Great Story!!
by: Joan McManaman

I loved it!!!
Your very proud husband led me to this site, I really enjoyed reading it!

Oct 30, 2010
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Thank you!
by: Amber-Dawn Rische Nicholas

I am so excited my story came in 3rd place. I really can't believe it. I appreciate the comments from those who have left them. I just now found the comment page, so sorry I didn't respond earlier to the comment in September. I'm dreaming of the day I get published. :) Thanks for your kind words, Amber-Dawn

Oct 30, 2010
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Congratulation!!!
by: Anonymous

I absolutely love this story!!! Really great imagination and very well written. Would love to read more. Kids are sure to love it!

Sep 22, 2010
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your first comments
by: Janet Slike

I'm thrilled to be the first one to leave comments for you. If you're brave enough to post your writing, you deserve feedback, right?

I loved this. It's very visual and the voice of the character shines through.

Good luck with the contest and keep writing!
Janet

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