A Kids Poem About Surfin'

by Lee
(Texas)

I've never been surfing but my poem is about what I think it might feel like.


Surfin'

The calm water on my feet,
paddling out.
The excitement is building
my heart is racing, my hands shaking.
It rises over my head,
falling like a thrust.
Dead, calm.

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Jun 08, 2012
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by: freya

iv never surfed but i seen it on tv
but i just dont think it would be calm it would be ruff

May 11, 2010
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Cool!
by: Anonymous

I like this poem. I haven't ever surfed either but it sounds good.

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